My plan came out just fine, but somehow, at the last minute I found myself on the floor being kicked in the butt and then dragged by the woman. Now I was really desperate, I could swear she would call the cops on me. Instead she took me all the way to her house. She made me wash up and comb my hair and started cooking for both of us. I had the option to run away with the purse but by that time I was too curious and hungry to do so. We sat together and talked for a long time. She told me her life story, which I found very similar to mine. I liked that she did not ask me any embarrassing questions and that she fed me good and even made me some hot chocolate.
When we finished she gave me 10 dollars which was more than enough to buy my shoes! She taught me that stealing is not good and that there are other ways to achieve what I want. As I went out the front door I thanked her. But she closed too soon and did not hear me. I never saw her again but I am thankful that she taught me such a valuable lesson.
Like the way you use to recreate what happens in this wonderful story. When you say at the beginning, "what if someone else buy my shoes", reminds me when I want something and hide it to come later hoping that no one take it. It's very difficult when we want something and can't have it but it's important to choose the right decisions and see all the alternatives before acting.
ReplyDeleteI like your story adaptation.
ReplyDeleteYour voice sounds like you really were Roger and really learned a lesson.
When I was reading I was imagining all the stuff that was happening.
Also its seem like you got a point of view, a point of view
that exposes that you got a lesson of the things that happen to you.
We can see that this story is a good way to teach a children how to behave.
I liked how you recreated the story because as you read you can tell that you "entered in character". The more important thing is that it looks like you really learned your lesson.
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